Your best so far. Get rid of that sparkly bright thing on his head/shoulder and your golden. Embedded vimeo videos will not play in HD because I don't have a paid account on vimeo. Click on the HD button to view the video in HD on vimeo's site if you so choose to do so.
it is something with a x in it so may be but always remember saving in layers then as a flat image I made 2 folders for each thing (Tags.Banners, Button, ext) i named one Tag Editing in case i should ever go ack and edit anything and then a folder called Tags just for flat images. I trust everyone, just not the devil inside of them.