hmmm...the render doesn't really blend that well as you said. The text is poopy. Cool effects, but doesn't really go with the render, I would try a gradient to blend the colors better.
And blur or smudge the edges of the render to make it look like he's in the sig not above.
k I'll mess with it later I got another idea. 10% Luck, 20% Skill, 15% Concentrated power of will, 5% Pleasure, 50% Pain, and 100% reason to remember the name."
ohhh i like that better... I think the render needs to be better centered and resized bigger since those drips are faded you can't really see them so just resize it.