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Van Lent
Gries21Date: Wednesday, 02 Jun 2010, 1:04 AM | Message # 1
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Please don't be that harsh.


 
AtomicFlameDate: Wednesday, 02 Jun 2010, 11:13 AM | Message # 2
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At first glace its not that bad, but after looking at it for a more than 12 seconds the text needs to be worked on.

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Gries21Date: Wednesday, 02 Jun 2010, 1:50 PM | Message # 3
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I know the text is bad I need to get better fonts.

 
SiphenzDate: Wednesday, 02 Jun 2010, 3:13 PM | Message # 4
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Not really feeling this...

Blurred flowers do not look good. Sparkles... seem out of place, as does the BG.


 
Gries21Date: Wednesday, 02 Jun 2010, 4:35 PM | Message # 5
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NexusDate: Wednesday, 02 Jun 2010, 5:35 PM | Message # 6
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the grave stone is the focal, the Flowers are Foreground affects, not meant to be noticed
 
SiphenzDate: Wednesday, 02 Jun 2010, 11:49 PM | Message # 7
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flowers and sparkles are the first thing i noticed...

 
MariahDate: Thursday, 03 Jun 2010, 1:49 AM | Message # 8
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I think it kind of looks like the gravestone is floating. As Siph said, I'm not a big fan of the blurred flowers, however I think the sparkles are a nice touch.



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