umm not much to say here...I mean it's abstract so w.e you want it to be is gonna be good. I would suggest ading a bit of orange red lighting or shadowing near the ring of death thing you got going on. Other than that pretty cool idea.

Text ruins the direction the sig is pulling towards. The text should be dead center. The color of the text is hard to see, I probably would have gone with an orange red like the color of the ring or just black.

I don't know much else to say besides that. I don't know how much you made of it.

any ways
I'd works on the flow
and lose the text