you have the flow right but the way you put the text just destroys the flow. i would suggest a few displacement maps to spice up the background a bit more as well my heart belongs with my sanity. because both restrict who i can become
I like it except text and the grainy blue white thing next to his face, smudge that, then add some displacement maps like zex said.
Agreed
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