I like version 2 except for the border. Either ditch it or keep it at black. I'm an anti border person.
V1- The render is not blended enough V3- I think you may have chosen the wrong font for your text.
Embedded vimeo videos will not play in HD because I don't have a paid account on vimeo. Click on the HD button to view the video in HD on vimeo's site if you so choose to do so.