Meh...not really a fan of this one splint. behind the smudging looks like a weird black thing going left and it ruinns the flow of the smudging going up. Text isn't bad could be better kinda bland.
The thing that gets it the most is the colors, it's really hard to work with knights and all that cause they are all grey, grey renders are kinda hard to work with. I woulda suggested using more of a stock look for this on just because it's so hard to blend grey in with colors and make it look good.
Hope this helps :\