well what i see is this
The render is boring, thus you have a ton of FX to compensate which, in my opinion, only detract from this. It feels very... insensible to me. The best thing this has going for it is the colors and even then I feel like they are over saturated. Then again this is what art is... expression of oneself/one's own interpretation of something; this is why I don't like it and others do.