Attention
If you have something new to add, then please do so, but if you are going to just say, do what he said or just repeat the previous posts, then don't bother to post please. Not pointing any fingers, just keep in mind to try to give some NEW advice or comments.
Eruption
I would reduce the lighting a little, and maybe even make the lighting with a tint of green like her helmet. Then change the text to a better one that goes with the effects, and make the text green like her helmet with a yellow border, the same color as the brushes. Maybe lower the opacity of the text as a whole, so it doesn't stick out TOO much, but just enough.
These things may work and they may not, I calls 'em as I sees 'em.
