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my first smudgey
soulDate: Thursday, 19 Aug 2010, 11:15 PM | Message # 1
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my first smudgey sig blitz come help man lol u god at smudgies
 
BlitzKriegDate: Friday, 20 Aug 2010, 0:11 AM | Message # 2
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Was about to comment when my dumbass drunk brother tried to pull the computer away...lol

Compliments:
1. You used colors from the render and integrated them into the BG.
2. You used some sort of c4d.

Critique:
1. It needs some sort of lighting
2. The render is smudged a little too much around the edges
3. Text is bad
4. More effects, like c4ds, fractals, stocks (set at a low opacity behind your render)

It's a good start, and I'm sure your next will be even better.


Smudgies <3

 
SiphenzDate: Friday, 20 Aug 2010, 2:42 AM | Message # 3
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increase contrast
get some depth
kill the text
put some fx around the render


 
BlitzKriegDate: Friday, 20 Aug 2010, 3:11 AM | Message # 4
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and if at all possible, IMO
it would look better if you moved the render up,or
made the render larger,
because there is a lot of free space<--(dont let IKY see those last two words)


Smudgies <3

 
AtomicFlameDate: Friday, 20 Aug 2010, 3:38 AM | Message # 5
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You've really stepped from your last sig. As the other members have already said all I think you need to do is center your render and enlarge it, add more C4D stuff and bring the text closer to the render( I would move it close to the right side of the render) so it does'nt create an awkward flow.

Very good improvement!


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MrJigglesDate: Friday, 20 Aug 2010, 11:02 AM | Message # 6
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i think you should do everything said above except center the focal ithink it should be on the left or right side as you have it now imo

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