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EruptionDate: Sunday, 19 Sep 2010, 8:06 PM | Message # 1
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V1-

V2-

I personally like V1 better.


 
AtomicFlameDate: Sunday, 19 Sep 2010, 8:18 PM | Message # 2
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Both are really good. Background is very good.

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EruptionDate: Sunday, 19 Sep 2010, 8:20 PM | Message # 3
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The original background was horrible so i pulled out an old c4d i still had from my previous sigs and smudged it on there a little bit with an opacity of 20 or so. but thanx! biggrin

 
DoudyxXxDubsDate: Sunday, 19 Sep 2010, 8:21 PM | Message # 4
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Hand seems a little too blurry to me...my nearsight aint that bad...

It's alright for a monochromatic sig.


 
EruptionDate: Sunday, 19 Sep 2010, 8:25 PM | Message # 5
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i did blur the hand just a little bit just to blend it in a little bit and to look more realistic so that it looks like im focusing in on the main body of the render

 
MariahDate: Monday, 20 Sep 2010, 1:51 AM | Message # 6
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yeah, I just would have removed the hand totally if I was gonna blur it. Very good though Eruption, the only thing I would change is the text. It's way too far away from the focal point and my eyes are drawn to the text instead.

Not bad though. wink




Thanks DoudyxXxDubs for the awesome b-day sig!
 
EruptionDate: Monday, 20 Sep 2010, 3:36 PM | Message # 7
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Very good though Eruption, the only thing I would change is the text. It's way too far away from the focal point and my eyes are drawn to the text instead.

whah... my eyes are drawn to vaders shiny helmet wink


 
DenialDate: Monday, 20 Sep 2010, 8:11 PM | Message # 8
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V1 is better IMO and i like the background, and my eyesight is like the worst out of all Texas.. 2year ago when i went to get my new glasses i had -10, so now i probably have like -15 haha
 
IKilledYouDate: Monday, 20 Sep 2010, 8:22 PM | Message # 9
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both r terrible im sorry render is over blended, that render is also overused and the effects r random no flow at all sorry :/

try bluring the render less for now use that render but dont ever use it again and make ur effcts flow with teh render biggrin






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BlitzKriegDate: Monday, 20 Sep 2010, 8:30 PM | Message # 10
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I think you should've made his hand the focal.

Teddy bears.


WTFLMAO


Smudgies <3



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SiphenzDate: Tuesday, 21 Sep 2010, 2:44 PM | Message # 11
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Myself, I like this one.

I do think you did overblend (or smudge) the render in some areas like the right side of his helmet. Also there is a part of the hand that you missed and I feel like you overdid that as well. You also smudged out his entire right shoulder.

For the hand... Next time just make new render layer and gauss blur (dont go over 4) andjust erase what you don't want blurred. Takes some time but will work better for what you were trying to achieve.

The text... if you're going to put it in the corner or off to the side it needs to be much more subtle so that it does not draw so much attention away from what people should be looking at.

This is a pretty cool sig I think... over-used render or not... <- that's retarded by the way. You just messed up on some parts, you had good ideas tho. wink

b&w is better by a mile btw


 
BlitzKriegDate: Tuesday, 21 Sep 2010, 5:36 PM | Message # 12
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I think you should've made his hand the focal.
Teddy bears.

WTFLMAO


LMAFAOLOLROFL


Smudgies <3

 
DoudyxXxDubsDate: Tuesday, 21 Sep 2010, 5:55 PM | Message # 13
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did someone hack you?

 
BlitzKriegDate: Tuesday, 21 Sep 2010, 6:05 PM | Message # 14
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No,someone changed "boobies" to "teddy bears"in my last post

Smudgies <3

 
HIKOMASHUDate: Tuesday, 21 Sep 2010, 8:17 PM | Message # 15
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LMAO

 
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