Move the render more towards the center and move the effects closer to the render. Scrap that terrible text. The flow gets ruined when you see the building on the right side so I suggest removing it or making it flow in the same direction as the effects. Embedded vimeo videos will not play in HD because I don't have a paid account on vimeo. Click on the HD button to view the video in HD on vimeo's site if you so choose to do so.