I like this one a lot soul, great job, your getting better every sig you learn a new thing. Keep crackin at it.
Make sure to keep your focal sharper than the BG and non-focals. So the person's eyes will be more attracted to it. Text sould have been a little green I think. Also make sure your border is the top layer...cause you kinda smudged over it in the second one. lol regardless I like that one better.