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My second sig
ReaverDate: Thursday, 21 Oct 2010, 10:38 AM | Message # 1
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Also, for those of you that don't know me, if you played swbf2, prolly know me as Frenzii or |AoD|{CL}Fr3nZii.

Here is my second sig, this is for a friend of mine on the PS3. She's stoked to see how it turned out and I would like to improve on it if need be before I give it to her. I need some heavy constructive criticism if you guys can. Oh and 1-10 my improvement on blending plz!!!!

new edit, redid the sig and i think it turned out much better, here ya go

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soulDate: Thursday, 21 Oct 2010, 10:50 AM | Message # 2
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well theres mutiple focal points the text the heart and the render and also the wolf but for a second ur getting good try what i said watch some tuts and i see u did that smudgey thing i told u which looks better but on a scale 1-10 = 4+
 
IKilledYouDate: Thursday, 21 Oct 2010, 11:45 AM | Message # 3
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Hey frenzi its me IKY and im the truth teller

The effects are all over the place no flow and the wolf was uneeded even if she asked for it colors dont match and the text is meh at best the red trails are uneeded behind the text

May i suggest reading some of our gimp tuts in our tutorials section. You can also go to gimptalk.com for tutorials.

Btw i really liked your last sig great job




 
soulDate: Thursday, 21 Oct 2010, 12:13 PM | Message # 4
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god damn iky surprised

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hes new not that much constructive critisism :O

 
DoudyxXxDubsDate: Thursday, 21 Oct 2010, 12:50 PM | Message # 5
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I would of made most of the sig look like how the heart is. Cause I really like that section, but it looks like there is different sections of the sig, and you should bring those all together.

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It's a little TOO blurry in some areas.
Render should be sharper, and not blurred
Wolf leave out, or bring closer to the girl
Border is kinda weird I would just stick with regular borders for now
Text, just take out and completely redo and don't make it so big.


 
BlitzKriegDate: Friday, 22 Oct 2010, 8:05 AM | Message # 6
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Smudgies <3



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MrJigglesDate: Friday, 22 Oct 2010, 8:20 AM | Message # 7
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Ya dont delete your photos on photobucket you have more memory on that account than you think haha

I trust everyone, just not the devil inside of them.

 
ReaverDate: Friday, 22 Oct 2010, 9:31 AM | Message # 8
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naw it was crap lol, i reuploaded a better version, tell me what you think now

 
HIKOMASHUDate: Friday, 22 Oct 2010, 10:04 AM | Message # 9
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make the owlf get closer to the girl.Make the text smaller

 
BlitzKriegDate: Friday, 22 Oct 2010, 5:39 PM | Message # 10
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why don't you color the chick or make the sig black and white
and the wolf should be a squirrel, it just makes sense.


Smudgies <3

 
HIKOMASHUDate: Friday, 22 Oct 2010, 7:30 PM | Message # 11
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lol i guess so blitz :b

 
ReaverDate: Friday, 22 Oct 2010, 7:42 PM | Message # 12
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its that black wolf cuz thats her fav animal, as for making it black and white, when i try it looks like poo... sad lmfao @ squirrel



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IKilledYouDate: Saturday, 23 Oct 2010, 2:17 AM | Message # 13
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this is better but i still think wolf is uneeded regardless if she wants it



 
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