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My second sig

Reaver

Date: Thursday, 21 Oct 2010, 10:38 AM | Message # 1

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Also, for those of you that don't know me, if you played swbf2, prolly know me as Frenzii or |AoD|{CL}Fr3nZii.

Here is my second sig, this is for a friend of mine on the PS3. She's stoked to see how it turned out and I would like to improve on it if need be before I give it to her. I need some heavy constructive criticism if you guys can. Oh and 1-10 my improvement on blending plz!!!!

new edit, redid the sig and i think it turned out much better, here ya go

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Message edited by Reaver - Friday, 22 Oct 2010, 9:40 AM

soul

Date: Thursday, 21 Oct 2010, 10:50 AM | Message # 2

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well theres mutiple focal points the text the heart and the render and also the wolf but for a second ur getting good try what i said watch some tuts and i see u did that smudgey thing i told u which looks better but on a scale 1-10 = 4+

IKilledYou

Date: Thursday, 21 Oct 2010, 11:45 AM | Message # 3

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Hey frenzi its me IKY and im the truth teller

The effects are all over the place no flow and the wolf was uneeded even if she asked for it colors dont match and the text is meh at best the red trails are uneeded behind the text

May i suggest reading some of our gimp tuts in our tutorials section. You can also go to gimptalk.com for tutorials.

Btw i really liked your last sig great job

soul

Date: Thursday, 21 Oct 2010, 12:13 PM | Message # 4

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god damn iky surprised

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hes new not that much constructive critisism :O

DoudyxXxDubs

Date: Thursday, 21 Oct 2010, 12:50 PM | Message # 5

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I would of made most of the sig look like how the heart is. Cause I really like that section, but it looks like there is different sections of the sig, and you should bring those all together.

So:
It's a little TOO blurry in some areas.
Render should be sharper, and not blurred
Wolf leave out, or bring closer to the girl
Border is kinda weird I would just stick with regular borders for now
Text, just take out and completely redo and don't make it so big.